What I am doing today!

 At this stage of the course, my group is focusing on a new short film production called Broken. Overall the short film has to last 3-4 minutes and can be on anything.

We had to individually write scripts and pick the best one out of our group, the group decided to pick mine and it a story about a girl that is 16 years old that has been involved in a long abusive relationship with someone 5 years older than her.

How well have you created your script?
I believe that I created the script very well, as I followed my tutors instructions on how to
layout a script and where to put dialogue and a parenthetical.

What can be improved?
Overall I believe there is room for improvement, such as the way some of the transitions are placed other than that I don't think there is any improving that needs to be done.

Does your script communicate a story?
My script does communicate a story about a girl that is 16 years old that is involved in an abusive relationship. 

The script and dialogue is below